All Comments on 'Pipe Dreams Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
umm

If Kane is a werewolf and has super sensitive hearing, wouldn't he hear Charlie in Lina's apartment and immediately start kicking ass?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Excellent

I liked the excitement of this chapter. I agree that Kane should have heard her first scream or followed her scent. This is well written an no errors, excellent.Looking forward to the next chapter,well done.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxabout 12 years ago
oooh mein gott!

Why did I dodge this story?

Bad bad girl

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 12 years ago
I love this story!

How did this guy get Lina out of her apartment without Kane hearing or smelling it? Is it possible that her father survived the explosion and is now running this operation?

defiantbutterflydefiantbutterflyabout 12 years ago
more, more, more...

really like this series, please continue. I can't wait for more....

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 12 years ago
You're doing good, girl.

Keep it up!

Cia81Cia81about 12 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thanks for the comments everyone! There will be more Pipe Dreams soon. I need to do more re-writing and add a few more scenes before the next part is ready to post.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
NEED MORE

Please Hurry!

Cia81Cia81about 12 years agoAuthor
Next chapter posted

Just a heads up to fans that I posted a new chapter for this story today. Hopefully it will post soon! Thanks to everyone who has been reading and commenting!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Don't stop writing!!

Please continue this story. It's amazing!

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