All Comments on 'Pirate's Revenge'

Please continue, should be a good tale

I do hope there will be more chapters. 5 stars for a very fine introduction.

Thank you all for taking the time to read my story. For those that are interested there will be more chapters to come, and the sex will get steamier as the characters build trust and commitment.

Please feel free to rate and comment on my stories.

If you enjoy my style of writing, you might enjoy my first story "Accept the Unexpected".

Thank you again.

The first chapter of Pirate's Revenge is well-written, but it is too fast-paced, and should have had a more extensive introduction and build-up, including character development. The love scene is also much too short.

Enjoyed the 1st Chapter

Too short and...oh yeah...

Everybody knows peeing on jellyfish stongs does nothing but make the pain worse.

So even if the ladies didn't know, or the guy beforehand...

He would definitely know by the time they were peeing in him.

Move on quickly, I hope, and look up easy things that can drive away your readers.

pee is not a solution to jellyfish. and not erotic either. very short.

also, mint on balls and cock burns. a lot.