All Comments on 'Pitching a Tent Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I like it. A little choppy and girls don’t do pommel horse.

Bullrider14Bullrider14about 3 years ago

Please keep this going I enjoyed very much

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunabout 3 years ago

Terrific Story! Hot, Romantic and funny, too. Well done.

Davester37Davester37about 3 years ago

I enjoyed this story a lot. I’m always a sucker for an actual setting and the rich detail you brought in adds to that. The characters are likable and they’re getting better developed as you go along. I hope you will continue!

Thank you for writing and thank you for sharing your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Looking forward to the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

No part 3?

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 3 years ago

Yes...More, please!

I LOVE women who know what they want!

And don't keep it a secret!! :+PPPPP

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I’ve been reading on this site for a long time, but just took the plunge into actual writing. Sports are a big part of my life, so don’t be surprised if some of my stories have characters that play baseball, basketball, football etc. I’m also a sappy romantic at heart, so th...

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