All Comments on 'Pitching a Tent Ch. 03'

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunalmost 3 years ago

Terrific! Probably your best so far. Really hot, descriptive sex scene, too. Good Work!

DickMarksDickMarksalmost 3 years ago

I love your writing style. Here's hoping you post more stories!

Davester37Davester37almost 3 years ago

I really enjoyed this tale. You write well. Thank you for writing, and thank you for sharing your work.

edewsgibedewsgibalmost 3 years ago

What are "pussy toads"? Lol, I think you meant "...pussy to ad...".

Anyway, typo nitpicking aside, loved the story, and would love to meet a girl like Skye.

Bullrider14Bullrider14almost 3 years ago

Really liked it. Hopefully u can do some more with these 2 characters .

AaronG07AaronG07almost 3 years ago

I came so much in my undies.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Like your stories - they are well written and engaging - look forward to more - thanks

AaronG07AaronG07almost 3 years ago

Made me cum in my undies. ;)

KingCuddleKingCuddlealmost 3 years ago

Love it! Bring on Baltimore!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 2 years ago

Really liked the story. Wouldn't mind more.

P_AndererP_Andererover 2 years ago

Just wish authors wouldn't use shouty capital letters. Totally unnecessary, if your writing is good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Gave up after the first page. A decent story ruined by lousy writing

AzuldrgonAzuldrgonover 1 year ago

I loved the series. It was wonderful.

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I’ve been reading on this site for a long time, but just took the plunge into actual writing. Sports are a big part of my life, so don’t be surprised if some of my stories have characters that play baseball, basketball, football etc. I’m also a sappy romantic at heart, so th...

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