All Comments on 'Plain Jane Ch. 01'

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NewAgeEroticaNewAgeErotica6 months ago

Loved this story! The idea of an ordinary girl becoming a huge slut is hot. You’ve done a great job starting this series. Hope to read more!

Qwer12Qwer126 months ago

Well done and well played. Fun college kids getting to explore and have a great time. 5 Stars for the entertaining college smut. Cheers

Shaglus_ZieglerShaglus_Ziegler6 months ago

Super sexy transformation. She’s great. Simply but well written. Loved it. Cheers 🥂

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey21106 months ago

I love a strong, confident, empowered woman. This girl is having the time of her life. This author is among my favorites and this story is a great example why. I love the graphic sex it is very erotic.

lillyjones1402lillyjones14026 months ago

Oh my god. Absolutely loved it !!!

AnnalovesitAnnalovesit6 months ago

Absolutely loved it, can't wait to see where this goes.

I'm sure Jane is going to get a lot more cock, I know I would

Anna

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

That was enjoyable, thank you very much! I hope you have some follow-up coming, these three guys good have a good time...I didn't hear anything about birth control but that could be worked into it I suppose.

Sometimes birth control makes women lactate, or they could medicate for that. That would be very hot, three Big Dogs for her to feed! 3 men should be able to keep her in style.Especially with help from a milk loving rich team backer...

Olive_DDOlive_DD6 months ago

5 stars. Looking forward to "CH.02"

And4778And47786 months ago

Extremely well written, and fairly presented from her own values and experiences

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Wow 💕 fabulous 😍

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very erotic, great story so far. Just as a random comment, it’s probably best to avoid using the word “itching” in any context relating to sex it’s paints an unpleasant negative picture of events.

I was pleasantly surprised that the slut comments are all in context too, when used in foreplay it can have a massive impact. That said when it’s weaponised and used in a hurtful manner it just annoys me.

Tess (uk)

YannickGoldmanYannickGoldman3 months ago

Can’t get enough

GoldustwingGoldustwing29 days ago

Really enjoying this story, Jane is having a great time and is in a good position to control the action and have lots of fun. 5 stars!

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