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All Comments on 'Plane Foolish Ch. 01'

by freaky.tales

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gdavisgdavisalmost 16 years ago
Don't Listen to the other comment

The other commenter must be upset because this wasn't just a basic stroke piece. I didn't even notice any proofreading mistakes - the story was that engaging. I like how you're building the action slowly but steadily. Look forward to reading more.

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