All Comments on 'Plans Come Together Ch. 02'

Fantastic, as ever.

Kyle does have a handle on this!

5

Super!

5*

Absolutely tremendous so far, Thank you.

Quite nice

5 stars

You da man ... 5

That was fucking hot

Revenge... served up in a cataclysmic stew of human discharges! Kyle, the macho killer. High 5s all the way.

5 stars. Getting hotter, now kinda rooting for Bailey to be the one for the MC though know a relationship built on revenge probably won't work long term. Definitely answered the question as to why Kyle wanted revenge on Steve and its definitely understandable motivation. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Ever seen a 52 yr old man do a Haappy Dance?!!! Well it happens every time you post something!!!!! Thank You!!!!!!

Shipping Jo ;)

Plan #4 took a serious hit here if Amy finds out the MC hooked up with Bailey.

Great sex and revenge? 5 Stars all the way !

More AspernEssling greatness in a different guise to his other stories- just wow,

Do you plan on a part 3?

Of Course he plans a chapter 3 . You're reading the works of AspernEssling one of the finest writers anywhere . He does it all . in fact if there is one thing he doesn't do it's leave his readers hanging . If you had to ask . Then I suggest you read more of his outstanding works .

GR8 chapter AE .

Okay. This is totally awesome. Can a revenge tale be kinda sweet? Yep. If AspernEssling is writing it. I hate myself for reading this before the series is done, since now I have to wait for each chapter, but I also can't resist reading each one as it comes out. Sigh. I guess there are worse problems. Thanks AE! You rock.

Cruelty beyond measure to make us wait more than a day for the next chapter!!!

Jokes aside - hooked by the story and please take your time to retain usual high quality of your content.

Not really my favorite kind of story. All this planning on getting even and revenge. His big plan the bed one of the young ladies, I know, it is an erotic story site. It is written well but I need a plot with a bit more action and suspense. 4 stars

5* with 1 given just for this "Adding Matt was like adding zero to any random number".

Unbelievable. So good. As expected. 👏👊🏼

How you engineered that exchange with Joanne and Steve was too perfect; I never would have imagined you letting Kyle score with Bailey, as I never conceived that one--but I did think it was well-planned for Bailey to get Lisa to film it. 5 (like the last one).

I wish you could quit working, to just write stories for us full time. Thanks KS

Great story getting better 5/5 all the way