by Samuelx
You have no friends, no life, no talent, if you did you wouldn't bombard us with this stupid shit.
Just a little person pretending....
You have great titles and subject matter but no details, descriptions, etc...U have been writing for years and not getting any better. Read other stories and learn from them. I by pass your stories every time I see your name. I was hoping by now you had improved. You seem to like to write and have the time. Try writing fewer stories and improve the ones you do write. I will check back I a couple years.