All Comments on 'Planting Seeds'

Great story. Looks like Damon will be victorious and fruitful! Too bad Lawrence won't survive the war.

I would love to read if he succeeded to impregnate and steal the brothers wife. So please continue.

It's a good idea with many direction possibilities. Keep it up, I'd love to read more.

Keep Writing, I would like to read more about this story.

Please continue, I would like to know what happens next

Very hot! Your write very well. I would love to read more if you put up another chapter.

It would be nice if she suspects something and pretends to take the drug and plays along feigning sleep to be aware next time. Then things could get fun as she resents her hubby more and more but craves the brother

This was good, I would like a part 2.

Would be great to conclude this story, so very intriguing.

sensual and erotic XD

I found this highly readable and a lively piece.

I hope you write more of this story. Please don't end it like this.

I loved it. I hope you add another chapter quickly. I can't wait to see what happens next. You did an excellent job!

I really liked this story...please do continue! Perfect wording to make me tingly ;)

I hope you write more.

what a great little story. Nicely written and intriguing scenario. Thanks.

For a come-back tale, this was Excellent.

Characterisation was good, though necessarily brief, the situation adequately described, action was as expected, and while it leaves an option to continue, I would believe your talent lies in single situational pieces, like this. A continuance would be painful.

Cheers and Well-Done

Kilroy