by LoquiSordidaAdMe
Out-damn-standing story! A perfect mix of love, sex, and eroticism! A 2nd chapter (next morning) perhaps?
Aw. Thank you Anonymous commenter. That made my day. I don't have plans for a chapter 2 yet, but I am curious to figure out what's going to happen with that electric toothbrush. I mean, would you ever brush your teeth with it again? I'll see if I can come up with more sexy ideas for Tanya and Michael.
That was a very enjoyable read. A married couple who are still in love with one another and still wanting to please each other during their coupling without a lot of kink or people involve, just emotion and love for one another. Thank you.
Thanks Dreamer. It is definitely difficult to find stories about everyday monogamous sex. That's why I challenged myself to write one. It turns out it's not easy. I'm glad you appreciate the effort. Comments like yours make it worth it.
Lit's notification system doesn't work 100% - I found this through the Feedback Forum.
Nice work.
No worries, EB. Thanks for the read. That was quite a review Carnevil9 gave me on the Story Feedback forum. Of course he had some great things to say about your "Songs of Seduction - Water" story too. The guy obviously has good taste.