All Comments on 'Play Night'

Great story, keep them coming.

I just read the first paragraph but I could tell from that this was only one more in a long line of wimp husband, slut wife stories. Skimming through it, I also found a depressing number of grammatical errors and evidence the "writer" doesn't know how to compose a sentence, much less a paragraph.

Great job. Please keep 'em coming. Not enuf couple in glory hole stories. Sharing is important :-)

Keep up the stories. Ignore the moron so called "reviewer" who hasn't got any sexual imagination or the balls to try anything different. His is a long line of boring reviews for many really good stories and authors. He needs to find a different site since every comment he makes shows he not mature enough to read stories on this site.

great story....i loved it!!!!

I like your writing style and good on you for having a go. As to "Anonymous"; If you are going to shit can someones writing at least have the balls to say who you are. There is nothing wrong with constructive criticism providing that it is actually constructive. You refer to the husband in this story as a wimp. I think perhaps that you are the wimp.

luved it as good as your 1st i came and ate it all looking at your face!

Excellent!

Wish you'd write more both stories are excellent!!

nice...terrific story! Thank You!