All Comments on 'Playing 2 Games at Once'

Bit rushed — both the story and the sex. Wondered what game is being played, not that it is key to this short piece, though figures in first third of story and again at end. Wonder if Cole really necessary; he, too, figures a bit much. Why is younger sister off limits? I am probably being picky, but the piece has potential. Still “liked it” and your crisp writing style.