All Comments on 'Playing Dirty'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Interesting story line...

I suspect the writer’s sex but do not want to say. It reads well and the sister wold know her brother was a hunk. This could led go for a few more chapters, but do not make it a family tryst.

Bob150BobBob150Bobalmost 6 years ago
Great!!

Read it for what it is. ...

A sexual gilood time.

Thanks for sharing.

Bob

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Slightly misleading

It might just be me but is it really may/december if the oldest character is "pushing thirty"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
MAKES SENSE TO ME

If a couple are 80 and 90, it's no big deal, but for a woman pushing 30, 19 is really young for a guy. Think most women would agree.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great Story

Hot and fun. Loved it.

LiveLoveLaugh711LiveLoveLaugh711over 4 years ago
Next Chapter, Here I Come

I’m new here, but I really enjoyed this story. Headed to read the next chapter.

chytownchytownover 4 years ago
What A Great Start*****

I hope they are all this HOT! and entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

19yr old cake didn't play fair, and way it is written looks like he planned to seduce her as soon as he saw her in the car

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