All Comments on 'Playing "The Game" Ch. 06'

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NonanonymNonanonymover 4 years ago
This was cute!

I have a feeling Olivia isn’t the only one playing the game though. Charlotte’s got w streak to her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Uff

Happy to see you continue the story, cant wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More please

This is great. Please continue. Love that Charlotte is in on the act too. Would be hot if Charlotte found a way to make every task from the app more humiliating. For example if she had to go to the glory hole, Charlotte could add that she had to be naked and barefoot in that disgusting room. Or she could make a task like "no bra or panties" a permanent rule. The possibilities are endless!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Much Promise

To summarize the thread, started with eroticism on steroids and switched to gutter-level crap (literally). Take the first two chapters and continue with Charlotte in control since she recommended Olivia. Have her pulling the strings while coming back to the room to console her roommate (knowing exactly what Olivia has endured). Write the two geeks out. Rewrite the father/Olivia scene; could have been hot. Have Jimmy Stewart stubble upon free head in the restroom with a reasonable two-minute scene.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
nasty!

Nasty is good! Continue! Please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Next chapter

when will come out the next chapter????

VaVaVoom_UKVaVaVoom_UKabout 4 years ago
When??

When will the next chapter be posted?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
The game.

Keep playing the Game it is awesome

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please continue

I love this series. I can't wait to read what hapoens next

mcseminolemcseminoleover 3 years ago
F'n Fantastic

Incredible series. I will offer no suggestions as I find your guidance on this journey perfect. Please take us further.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

More please.....................

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

More please.....................

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The last chapter had nothing to do with the game!

PonderingLifePonderingLifeover 2 years ago

The sub-plot with the 2 guys who came up with the game has not finished yet.

So need one more chapter.

SlutbaneSlutbaneabout 2 years ago

You can't stop there!!;

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Last chapter needs to be a media release form to show her face and all videos in full.

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An update for anyone reading this. I lost all of my previous work and then lost the desire to write. But I'm back writing a little now. I am struggling a little with ideas so if you have some post comments on the stories. I'll read them. Currently working on a new chapter of ...

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