by heavyandhorny
I have a feeling Olivia isn’t the only one playing the game though. Charlotte’s got w streak to her.
This is great. Please continue. Love that Charlotte is in on the act too. Would be hot if Charlotte found a way to make every task from the app more humiliating. For example if she had to go to the glory hole, Charlotte could add that she had to be naked and barefoot in that disgusting room. Or she could make a task like "no bra or panties" a permanent rule. The possibilities are endless!
To summarize the thread, started with eroticism on steroids and switched to gutter-level crap (literally). Take the first two chapters and continue with Charlotte in control since she recommended Olivia. Have her pulling the strings while coming back to the room to console her roommate (knowing exactly what Olivia has endured). Write the two geeks out. Rewrite the father/Olivia scene; could have been hot. Have Jimmy Stewart stubble upon free head in the restroom with a reasonable two-minute scene.
Incredible series. I will offer no suggestions as I find your guidance on this journey perfect. Please take us further.
The sub-plot with the 2 guys who came up with the game has not finished yet.
So need one more chapter.
Last chapter needs to be a media release form to show her face and all videos in full.