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MafenMafenabout 1 year ago

The "surprise" that Jordan was male was totally predictable.

These one or two sentence paragraphs are tedious to read. Join some together!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Pretty good overall, No blatant typos or wrong names of who is supposed to be doing what. I disagree with the earlier comment regarding structure, it is consistent with the internalization of the narrator's thoughts. OK, I was disappointed that Jordan was a guy, but everything was consensual, so go with it.

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