All Comments on 'Playing With The Boys'

absolutely stupid and unbelieveable story your writing sucks and so do you don't bother continuing to write

been on this very beach with my wife, what a place . loved ur story, ièm sure hundreds of fantasies have been fulfilled here ,a couple of mine were, Believe it!

Don't pay no mind top that other guy. Good story - nice

gradual build-up to a good payoff - good writing that had me

jacking hard. Good stuff.

more please :)

great story line - makes me horny as hell

I really liked this story. You have a talent for writing.

Absolutely fucking loved it.

There is nothing wrong with the writing at least from the perspective of someone who reads stories as a form of pleasure. The writing flows really well, and never gets in the way of the pleasure it provides. It provides plenty of detail that gives the story substance. All in all its much better then I could ever do.

Is it believable? Isn't the point of erotica the conveying of what may of happened, embellishments, and fantasy? Its presented as something that happened, and it has enough believability that it just may of. Not in my reality, but in some hot Canadians reality just maybe. If it is real I'm going to have to pay homage to Wreck beach.

I'm not going to mark you down because you didn't talk about getting sand in your coochie.

Forget the nut case crap. So your not a professional writer, who cares? Your stories seem very real and very, very hot! Keep 'em cumming!

I enjoyed your story very much! Pay no heed to insults sent anonymously, they mean nothing. I enjoy m/m action in stories as well, but I fully understand not everyone does. Please keep writing.