All Comments on 'Playtime'

Very nice, and so true about what some of us crave. Thank you.

Ok, I thought this one was on par with my other offerings, but it's getting an average score lower than the one with no sex in it. Clearly something's amiss- so leave me comments saying why you didn't like it. (Unless you're the arse-milliner who hates D/s play, in which case why are you even reading?)

In answer to your question: if this story is getting lower marks than your others, then the ratings are unfair. While not white-hot in terms of inducing lust, it is beguiling, erotic, and well-written.