All Comments on 'Playtime'

by Kay Derwydd

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
This story

Has been mentioned on the NEw Story Review Thread in the Authors Hangout.

FtF

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
when are going to write a other stories

i love all your stories but in this one i need more detail like what are the boys and how did they meet. i can't wait for you to write a other.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Wonderful!

Would like to read more about them! Pleeeaaaseee! :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Mmmmm amazing story :)

I love this story everytime I read it and when I finally hit the end I get so disappointed that there's nothing left! Have you considered writing more about these guys?? Please???? :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
more please

this is the first time i read it...was shocked to find the end. I wanted more, more, MORE!!!!! Please contuine....please....

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow! Perfect Family!!

I like this story very much. It's very lovely and too short to end in only one chapter. All guys are very cute & hot! Especially, Danny. I like him very much. Please write more about him & Nicky along with Bret and Jonathan again. ;)

FatBottomedGirlFatBottomedGirlalmost 13 years ago
smoking!

have to fan myself here to cool down. hott hott hott!

handcuffsnwhipshandcuffsnwhipsover 12 years ago
Wow

Holy hell that was hot. I would love to read more about the four of them. Pleease write more.

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