All Comments on 'Playtime with Jenny Ch. 01'

Pity you didn't came to more details like: what kind of underwear were they wearing and things like that.

They were worried about Jenny. Jenny came to spend the night, and had a wonderful weekend. Good yarn, well-written, with good character development.

Looking forward to chapter two.

"Sure enough, within five minutes Lisa was trying to kiss Carl. He still seemed unmoved." Shouldn't it be Jenny????

This needs a sequel

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Rapier875 - thanks for your comment. I did start a second chapter but despite going back to it several times over a year or so I couldn't get a result I was happy with!

Keep working on the story, you will get there. It's too good to not finish even if you have to over fiction the whole thing. Discuss things like how hairy their pussies were (don't make them shaved and stubble!), talk about the sizes of their thickly engorged cunt lips, their erect clit sizes- out from under their hoods, how they eventually decided to eat pussy - encouragement needed / not needed. You will get this one finished!