All Comments on 'Please!'

Despite being a masculine fantasy, this was a very good story. Hot, obviously, but also well written, and fun. The contrast between the girls was a bit overdone, but hey, it's porn after all :-)

I LOVED the descriptions of the girls' arousal, often male-written stories concentrate on the visuals, but all those sticky liquids got me really wet myself :-) And I seriously fancy Maggie now!

There are few typos though (waste=waist etc) which detract from the overall great quality and strange use of single quotes, which you might want to edit for.