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All Comments on 'Please Miss, Can I Suck Your Toes? Ch. 02'

by sucorteil

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Still a good premise.

Sex is again too rushed. Certainly needs longer teasing of his cock before he gets to cum. Could be while he adores her toes/feet, but doesn't have to be. Although it's not my thing, at least some of that cock teasing should be with her feet.

Four stars.

sucorteilsucorteilalmost 3 years agoAuthor

On the off-chance the anonymous poster sees this, thank you for the feedback on both chapters. It's appreciated and I can see that even though the story was about a lunchtime quickie, it doesn't have to be written at such a fast pace!

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Foot fetishist who likes to write quick, concise, straight(ish)-to-the-point sex scenes - some of them slightly believable, some of them not. I mainly write foot fetish erotica shorts which are based on my numerous fantasies and experiences as well as some more 'mainstream' ...