All Comments on 'Pleasing His New Bride Ch. 01'

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Qwer12Qwer12almost 2 years ago
Fun Times For The Young Couple

Very well written and developed. Fun likable couple that are exploring the fun of having choices and making choices together. Looking forward to many more chapters of sexual exploration for these kids. Thanks for your good storytelling and thanks for your time to write and publish this. Cheers

littlewilly1littlewilly1almost 2 years ago

Looking forward to the next chapter maybe eating a creampie

StrappySandalsStrappySandalsalmost 2 years ago

I'm not a cuck fan, but I liked it!! Loving couples figuring out how to have mutually great sex is such a turn-on!! Well done JealousCuck

Buster2UBuster2Ualmost 2 years ago

5 Stars for writer, it sounds like they are "on their way" now towards more adventure. Adventure which would include real lovers, cuckholding, prob a black baby. I can't wait to read all about it. Thanks, good job!

cibixcibixalmost 2 years ago

Great opening chapter to this story, looking forward to their adventures!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Please continue this story! I'd love more on how Leo starts owning Mia's white pussy.

awyldsideawyldsidealmost 2 years ago

did this story finish? or part 2 coming? I hope so. Can't wait until she has him lick his cum from her used pussy.

KaneyKaneyalmost 2 years ago

What a fantastic start, can’t wait for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

5 Star+ Great start with loads of potential. Can't wait to read more.

Pat66GearyPat66Gearyalmost 2 years ago

Wow! David is so lucky. I wish I was him. Great storytelling and 5 stars. Would like to read more of their journey.

lotusluvrlotusluvralmost 2 years ago

Can't wait for part 2. Looks like she is totally in control and he will do whatever she asks.

darthnader19darthnader19almost 2 years ago

The transition from dildo size and roleplay is done so well can't wait to see this continued

castaway98castaway98almost 2 years ago

Good start.

Really enjoyed his trips to the adult boutique store and his conversations with Lana. Keep those scenes coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I'm drooling thinking about Leo impregnating Mia' white pussy. Roleplay, that's all it is. Until it isn't...

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