All Comments on 'Pleasure in Control Ch. 03'

ahh the tension. cant wait for the rest. dont keep us waiting too long!!!

A great story, written in a very professional manner and a turn on from word to word. I love it!

Up to chapter 5 was posted as one fantastic submission. Skip to chapter 6, pleeeeeeeaaaasssseeeeeeeeeeeee

I'm dying to find out what happens next.

XXXX TC

i have read three chapters and i am still trying to figure out why you classify this as lesbian sex?. when there hasn't been a trace of it in any shape or form.

You have graced your story with some of the most beautiful feminine feelings during masturbation and then you just - - - cum. That should have been the icing on the cake. I would have gladly spent the ten or so minutes reading while you described that event. You brought us up to a very high crescendo with your being able to put off this most desirable climax and you cheated us out of seeing and feelng you go mad with passion and finally crashing to completion. It would have been a pleasure to have seen you pass out with the intensity of the occasion. You are a gifted writer and I really do not have any complaint because your story is so good. Thank you again for all your effort on our behalf. Hector

I enjoy a slow build up as much as the next person, but this is ridiculous. Its redundant and, sorry, boring. I love lingerie, but describing every last detail is too repeitive. I hope the rest of the story picks up as if it doesnt, I will either stop reading and/or vote a lower score. Cheryl

The long description of the Julia’s interaction with the beautifully dressed women at Passionella’s office is not to lengthen the narrative, but to bring Julia to a state of extreme sexual frustration and high irritability. Her body is helpless against this assault because of the length of time she has denied herself masturbatory relief. The sexual tension raging within her body is only intensified, as she spends the day surrounded by sexy lingerie exhibits and closely interacts with beautifully dressed co-workers. This subtle form of foreplay takes complete control of her emotions and thoughts, rendering her unable to concentrate on anything, but her aching pussy.

The long masturbatory scene in Kristen’s apartment was extremely erotic. The author uses such unique figures of speech to describe the struggle raging within Julia’s body as she alternately teases and then denies herself. Each chapter seems to reveal evidence that the overriding theme of this book is Julia’s discovery of her own true sexuality and how exciting the development of it was. The slow seduction and very powerful lust building in the women will forcefully erupt into an incomparable climax in the ensuing chapters. The chapters must be sequentially read to experience the building eroticism; when approached in that manner, the journey is extremely rewarding. Enjoy a magnificent tease and sensual arousal along the way. Eloquently written and so literate!!

please do search and replace for 'taught' to be replaced by 'taut' meaning tight.

Wonderful work. Can't wait to get to the next episode.

That, dear Julia, was beautiful erotic writing. The teasing was delicious; her masturbation was lovingly described, and the adjectives were perfect. I had touched myself, at first tentatively as SHE was cautious in her exploring, then bolder as SHE decided to prolong her self-pleasuring. Then -- she came! I, myself, continued playing...and, who knows?!

Kisses, J

*panting*

More.

Jason

Vivid , riveting, yet left me hoping it gets better!

5🌟's

Julia_Again,

Very nice, well done!

I think she needs to visit a lesbian bar where there are no fellow employees and get some satisfied aide. Otherwise she'll have to wait for one of her very wealthy client to invite her to that private company lounge.