All Comments on 'Pleasure Package Ch. 01'

... for this introduction to your excellent work, I look forward avidly to finding out what happens in Part 2! Very well done - five stars, and don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter!

Excellent! Hot and compact! Please go ahead!

Thank you for the feedback and support! I look forward to posting another chapter soon :)

Can't wait to read what happens to you next. I am hoping this is a real situation. I want more.

Why do you write, "Mercifully, you stop"?

A woman of such intense sexuality and luxurious eroticism should never, ever want it to stop.

You understand how women think - much better than even many other women ourselves.

Please, you MUST write the sequel - soon!

Alyson G

Thank you all again for your comments! Part 2 has been submitted. And the full story has also been submitted with illustrations as well. Hopefully that will be up soon under the illustrated section of the site.

@Anonymous - she's happy that he stops because she is afraid if he continues, she will break the rules :)

@sexxyvixen - perhaps the illustrations will add to the sensation of reality :P