by BiLaura
I absolutely love a bi-wife story whether husband knows or not.
I hope you get readership on this. Spontaneous and full consent between these two women. It did not flow as some writers are able to do. What I mean is something such as this;
I told her that I had never tried scissoring before and asked if she would be up for it.
becomes
I told her that I'd never scissor sexed a female but was ready to with her.
Just small changes so the characters own their decisions.
You sound like a bitter old dyke. How does that old adage go? Oh yeah, if you don't have anything nice to say then shut the fuck up! If you're not already enrolled in it, then i suggest you take anger management classes.