All Comments on 'Pocket Full of Innocence Ch. 01'

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Gus AsparGus Asparalmost 15 years ago
drama!

Wow! This has the makings of an exciting story! Give us chapter 2 soon, please!

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightalmost 15 years ago
An actual plot!

Good so far!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
More more more!

Best I have ever read on this site. I assume/hope that the erotic content will build slowly. Very very well written. Congrats.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
crap

too slow

maxx308maxx308almost 15 years ago
Excellent Start

A very nice beginning to what is hopefully a great story.

Looking forward to part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good story

too bad it was never finished.

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