All Comments on 'Poetry & Blood Ch. 06'

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AnonymousWriter244 over 5 years ago

I like it.

I like how this story develops, but it seems you are taking the eerie route (I was expecting Laura to remain a normal girl in the house). Laura as a vampire, it has its apeal but... I donn't know, you are the writer... I will let you amaze me. I can hardly wait for your next instalment. Good luck!

eugene2k over 5 years ago

I on the other hand like the fact that Laura is apparently getting more vampy. The slow conversion and how Laura is now scared of what she is becoming is especially nice.

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Definitely Original

I want to see if her lust for her friend Claire will take over, or if she'll be able to control herself. Either way, I don't want to see Camille/ Marcilla with Laura K, I want to see her take and dominate our Laura.

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My name is Trixie Adara. I write erotica, almost exclusively lesbian erotica. I prefer mind control stories or any story with an element of the supernatural. However, I also love the slow build and an element of realism to my stories. If you love my work, please check out my...

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