All Comments on 'Poison Darts and Pineapples'

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26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Three times

Took me three times through, but I finally got it. Old Botu done pulled a fast one on Jabo. Good little story after all. I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well now, that was different! A fable for our enjoyment.

Thank you very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well that was different

However it has absolutely nothing about wives having sex with others. It probably should be in the non-erotic category as there is absolutely nothing erotic about this.

breville1breville1over 5 years ago
Brilliant!

No substitute for wisdom of ages. Loved it!.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
A wonderful story

A thinking persons story- don't see too many of those

tazz317tazz317over 5 years ago
WHY TREAT AN OLD WISE MAN LIKE A FOOL

the experience with age and success should knock down all protests, TK U MLJ LV NV

silentsoundsilentsoundover 5 years ago
5* easy.

I don't think this belongs in this category but I'm still glad this clever little gem was posted here.

A great little cautionary tale about the dangers of taking your elders lightly.

dark2donut2dark2donut2over 5 years ago
Wonderful original story

Finally somebody with completely original story.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Again, this was a great little story. I would like to see these characters again.

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 2 years ago

That’s a famous author level story. Truly too good for this website

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If anyone wants to write a sequel, adaption, or alternate ending to any of my stories, that will leave me ecstatic. You have full permission. Just mention me and my story. George Anderson's "February Sucks", really disturbed me. I have 11 sequels to it in various stages ...