All Comments on 'Poker Night'

by rsskas

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good start.

Good start. A bit short. Why didn't the guys get to fuck her? Fuck her ass? No blowjobs except her husband? Now complete the story.

Dr_BullDr_Bullalmost 6 years ago
Wow

Very nice, a bit short, but very much headed down the right path. Oh and one more thing, Can I join your next poker party?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Cool

concept needs to be expatiated into a real story

chickmagnetchickmagnetalmost 6 years ago
hot

great pacing....liked the simpleness of the concept and the story was well written 5*...keep Writing

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