All Comments on 'Pol Science Ch. 01: The Proposal'

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DeathAndTaxesDeathAndTaxesabout 9 years ago

I like the concept of the protag with the bold voice being married off to the man with none. Could go all sorts of interesting place, especially with her possibly having to speak for him in parliament. I'll go check out CH 2. :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
good premise unedited

Major.unedited errors too distracting.

fanfarefanfareabout 9 years ago
Impressively Unique

NOD, I am impressed at the singular promise as you develop this storyline.

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