by HeyAll
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You are one of the best writers on Literotica. This story is just another one of your many representations of your talent.
I support my “local” site writer HeyAll. One of the best on this site.
Really enjoyed it. Right up until the finale. I think you could have made it longer, you have the ability, and if so I’m sure it would still have been a good read. Even better than it is now.
I like the idea of the female crime boss being a mother and I may steal it and use it.
An interesting twist on your normal take on things.
One point that jarred with me. Raymond is aged 32, yet Sasha describes them both as being young. Personally that description would only apply to someone in their twenties when talking about relationships. A moot point but hey it didn't spoil the story.