All Comments on 'Policewoman to Gangsters Moll'

Nice start! Fall into hedonism. Continue, Please!!

Great first effort keep writing. Thank you.

Part 2 please

So well done; like the slow but progressive turn of the high minded lady;

adding the big tits was a nice touch; as well as the other body mods;

please continue

Thank you all for your kind comments! I do have a few ideas for a part 2, but it may not be about Linzi (she might make a cameo), but I need to work on getting the right plot (sounds daft, but the story is just as important to me as the sex).

The next story I'm working on isn't quite brainwashing, and is more a romance, so I hope that doesn't disappoint!.

Great story! I love the concept of a policewoman becoming a gangster's girlfriend. However, you may want to proof read or have an editor to watch out for grammar errors.

Great story. Linzi has a way to go yet on her journey of corruption.

More and deeper.