All Comments on 'Pony Boy Ch. 04'

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damejintymcgintydamejintymcgintyalmost 11 years ago

This story is my guilty pleasure. It contains what I abhor in real life, where people become commodities but Ben (and Jed) are written so well that I hope they get their HEA. The story is hot too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I've been following the story and really like it. Don't mind this chapter didn't have pony stuff in it, but I can't say I enjoyed it. Guess I'm too disturbed by the path he's on now. The incline on the slope is steep. I wish he wasn't starting to accept and like so much of this. You've brought Ben to life so well that I just want to call his momma and tell her what danger her baby is in. Lol

nanobotnanobotalmost 11 years ago
Well done

You impress me greatly with your ability to outrage and excite simultaneously. Your character strikes me as so real I feel as if I were reading the diary of some naive collage student who is recalling the daring exploits of youth. I want to call out, stop the madness...I cover my eyes and yet I understand well his curiosity. I like this fool, I want to protect him from these monsters. I wonder if he will let anyone know that he is in over his head before it is too late.

AnonymousAnonymous24 days ago

i wish i was the boy who was caned and fucked i would wear panties stockings suspenders and bra to be the slave in this need a fuck and be filled with cum

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