All Comments on 'Pool Boy Ch. 01: His Transformation'

Absolute drivel

That is an interesting new style you are using. It was nice to see a slow burn in only a page. You forgot the sex though so I am tempted to give you only 4 stars. When is part 2 coming? Is there sex in it? If not you're getting a 1. Just saying. Cheers Mate.

I really enjoyed this story and I hope I get to read more soon, I have fond memories of an older lady taking me under her wing after much begging and pleading and turning me into her maid so please continue with the story xxx sissy Lucy

A nice way to show the transitions over time. Now I want to see if Kim ends up wearing a collar for real and not just in her dreams.

Man, this really sucked

So much was skipped over. At some point he would have figured out something was wrong, would have seen a doctor and it would have made the story much better. Nothing ever goes this easily and can you imagine recognizing such extreme changes and not addressing it with friends, family or a doctor? Hell no. You start losing your business, people treat you strangely and you don't get answers. That's not normal. Making the MC act and respond with more common sense would help alot. It became obvious early on, the MC in this story was a drone and just responded to predators every move. No background on either as to why they would be in this situation, or any outside world that could threaten it.