All Comments on 'Pool Party Ch. 01'

THIS IS A GREAT STORY. I JERKED OF WHILE READING IT AND AM GONNA SAVE IT TO READ OVER AND OVER

Read it before in so many other stories. It's not horrible, but there's nothing special about it either that warrents anything other than a shrug.

for a wimp husband story.

Same as the millions of others.

Boring as shit.

AND more chapters to come???

Why bother

A tired premise, but on the plus side you managed to include just about every cliche associated with the wimp husband/slut wife category.

Just another cheap slut/wimpy cuckold story. Why do so many so called writers write this type of garbage, no one seems to like it?

It does not have to be original to be good. There are certain story types that give me a boner. This is one of them. BRAVO!The style is better than many who attempt this story. There is a nice long slow build up before the sex.

Very hot. I don't know why these idiots that whine about stories being wimpy read stories in this genre. I don't know what they like or expect, but I thought it was hot.

Enjoyed your story. It is most husbands' dream to have such an experience.

Keep up the good work and forget the brainless idiots who complain about everything on this site and in this section. They don't have the maturity, guts or no sexual prowess to explore beyond their own limited experiences, assuming they even have any.

I really liked it. Keep writing!

wow, what a turn on, wish it was me.. hot wife...

You watch your whore with another man and don't kick his ass, then you're a cuck.

Hope she got gangbanged bareback hopefully got knocked up every wife should let other guys fuck them bareback take the chance even if they become pregnant I know I did couple wife's at nudist resort knocked them up as even I did my aunt mom and my sister along with my cousin aunts daughter

Dside and noone are right...just another wimpy cuck and his whore wife story. So unimaginable and almost predictable. Same old tired cliches from the cheaters handbook. I don't understand why someone would want his lovely wife to screw around with another man or men in this case... With STDs and AIDs till around, you must want to die a slow death and take other sex crazed assholes with you. I hate how some writers try to make the cuck as a Loving and understanding wimp, with no backbone and no balls. And the slut wife as a selfish and manipulative bitch with no real love for her husband. Pathetic. These kind of stories are not my cup of tea.

You know the story sucks when even adding a second part to still doesn't help it. The comments were better than the story. It doesn't help that the story telegraphs what's going to happen next.

Excellent 5-star story. The anti-cucks that lurk here and read every cuck/hotwife/stag story are going the pound themselves raw and then write something very bad. You don't finish a story unless you like it. Good job.