All Comments on 'Pool Payments Ch. 09'

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

Six stars for this one. Just tremendous

OMG...that was a sexual circus...so good.

Oh you just keep it coming don’t you

I think he came 5 times in an hour in this chapter. That sounds more like punishment than pleasure.

I have a small suggestion. It would be better if we're introduced to the husbands of the 3 women with Alex having some interaction with them. I'm not saying they should realize what's going on, but giving them some screen time interacting with the main characters would make the story more real and exciting in my opinion. I would've also preferred if Alex's wife got more screen time.

Right now, about 90% of the chapter is sex. I would prefer 50% sex and 50% other things, like showing how the affair has changed their interactions with their spouses and how they're trying to hide their affairs from their families.

Please don't take this as a complaint. I still enjoy reading the series and gave a 5-star rating to every chapter till now.

Cum is at body temperature. Sperm is colder because it is stored in the testicles, outside the body.

Stop with this cliché.

Wow. Stumbled upon this.

you got a few good series with you

I'm waiting for the wife to come home and catch him playing with his three friends and join in the party!!!

It is so refreshing to read a story that is well assembled with likeable characters and story line that can be followed. Plus you have proofread it and used complete sentences! Too many stories today look and read like a huge text message. Bravo for a job well done and a hot story well written!

need to be more frequent with your updates to this story. i keep my eyes glued to your story page to see when the next chapter's out. Keep up the good work.