All Comments on 'Pool Reversal Pt. 01'

by GemimaCav

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Maybe more?

She was a bitch but it was a good story I would come back for another chapter to see how this story progresses

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Not bad. Could be better.

The story ended way too soon. What about the other kids at the party? Did they do anything other than setting up a story about a bitch demanding a shy kid to fuck her? I could take this story and add several pages of really hot reading material. So could the author.

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