All Comments on 'Poolside Ch. 04, Pt. 2'

by LeoDavis

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
never ending

Well Leo another jackpot winner,where does this boy get his stamina from a veritable goat. I must admit the thoughts of him turns me on, a thoroughly believable story

Love Jem 10/10

tompo296tompo296about 12 years ago
'Another one bites the dust'

I've started to read your stories and am absolutely loving them. You write superbly drawing the reader into your world. I find that I become very empathetic to the character. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Just seems like a constant barrage of "I'm a hot stud, you have to believe me!!"

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