All Comments on 'Poolside Ch. 04, Pt. 2'

by LeoDavis

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Just seems like a constant barrage of "I'm a hot stud, you have to believe me!!"

tompo296tompo296over 12 years ago
'Another one bites the dust'

I've started to read your stories and am absolutely loving them. You write superbly drawing the reader into your world. I find that I become very empathetic to the character. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
never ending

Well Leo another jackpot winner,where does this boy get his stamina from a veritable goat. I must admit the thoughts of him turns me on, a thoroughly believable story

Love Jem 10/10

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