All Comments on 'Poolside Daddy'

Yes! Breed that lit Baby Girl!

Hot - very hot!

This could be a multi chapter story of some great family fun!

fantastic. more please

Ridiculous.

Homosexual protector for the 3 biggest sluts(?) in 6th form/college, really neither have had sex except for dildoes: are not on birth control of some kind at 18 or 19 yrs old? As usual in these stories dad or first time boy friend has 10 or 12 inch dick as wide as a beer can (sometimes a Foster's can).

Father said a weak no to sunbathing naked with youngest daughter and agreeing to being sucked then fucking. He said at first once it was wrong, then like a little child s older by mother agreed, impossible.

Get real, final line of story says sister won't show up till dinner but really doesn't sound long time, referring to earlier comments. If dealing with character detail/development complete them.

This could be a great start of a great family fun love/sex story keep going building and developing

5Stars because the dirty talk and scene was so hot. Did she have a tan and tan lines of was her skin pale? Those types of mistakes really mess up a story.

A person would not cum by having there virginity taken, it takes stimulation and not just from rubbing a dick up and down the pussy for probably only a minute

Horny little daddys girl...loved to hear about their breeding.

ridiculous. was this written by a horny 12 year old?

Fucking HOT. Dripping by the end!! Would love to know what Josie and Stacey got up to after school, and with whom 😛😛

Horribly bad.. probably written by a 12 yr old as Anonymous had said...