All Comments on 'Poon Tang'

You (Correctly) say the airplane is a B-25 Mitchell bomber.

Then you say it was named for Jimmy Doolittle.

Huh? You already said it was a Mitchell (named for Gen. Billy Mitchell).

No, the plane wasn't named for Doolittle. However he did read the raid that bombed Tokyo with the type in 1942.

That said, it was the most famous B-25 mission, but the Mitchell is NOT named after Doolittle.

Thanks. I see the error and have corrected it. Good catch!

This story was much, much better than Switched.

racfguy,

Thank you for the encouragement. I'm hoping my revision of Switch will improve the story and its appeal. So any additional comments regarding what you think would make it better would be great.

Rachel

I didn't know what to expect seeing the title and then seeing it in Romance. But I was impressed by your story Deceptively Easy so I dove in. I'm glad I did. It is so interesting to read a woman's description of sex. Way different from most male descriptions, which tend to be solely about mechanics or dimensions or number.

So keep it going. Give me more!

R.

Almost caught!

It's amazing the odd places where some couples choose to have sex. Of course not many have an opportunity to have sex in an airplane named Poon Tang, but it makes for a good story. Thanks for posting.

Such a wonderfully suspenseful tail that is so excitingly RAW - superb with a delightful ending!

Hi, Rachel, great story, very enjoyable. I'll send you a PM with a couple of additional comments.

Enjoyable! Your handling of the emotions during the 'almost discovered' moment was a joy. But as a guy, I think you got off sort of on the guy being not seeming disconcerted with the possibility. A nice guy would have been protective, not for himself, but for the girl's feelings of embarrassment.