All Comments on 'Poorly Timed Backflip'

Quite good; multi-part story?

I loved the way you hinted about their past relationship by mentioning The Price of Salt.

This piece is wonderfully written. I’ll have to go read your others now while I wait for what’s next with Margot and Lua!

Relationship dynamics — very nice start; interesting characters and hint of their history. Glad you are sharing.

Loved it. Would also love to see this continue.

This is a tantalizing return, great characters far too good to waste on one part, love to hear more about them please. Thanks whatever though

Exquisite torture, so sad!!

POORLY TIMED BACKFLIP will you be writing part 2 and the ending

This was a beautiful story, full of lived experience and love. I’d love to know more about their past and future, but the story stands well on its own. And your sex scene is delicious, figuratively and, umm, literally. 💦

I wish you had had an editor, as it’s full of small grammar and wording errors that I found distracting.