All Comments on 'Pop Up Club Pt. 02'

A few minor grammatical issues but generally good. I really like her own uncertainty / sense of newness with this and that she is a bit feisty. Didn't like that he kind of forced her into "master" with an all-or-nothing ultimatum. In general it moved kind of fast (both chapters) but that is what you need in a story sometimes. I would like to see more exploration between the two of them and really liked the dynamic between them. Hope there is more.

I LOVED IT !!! IT made me wanna try BDSM 🥰🥰

I love the concern of consent that is clearly established and explained. Everything flows perfectly. Dominic is clearly very experienced and i very much enjoy the way he gently but firmly informs her and makes her accept her own submission. Beautifully written, amazing concept. Well done