All Comments on 'Popcorn Bucket'

by Sarkopheros

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Love it! Short and spicy 😜 but it gives me an idea. How awesome would it, be to do a series from the beginning! Brod and jae are already established and used to their conditions but following someone from the beginning would be cool. Like an origin story! Just a thought. Love your stories

SarkopherosSarkopherosover 8 years agoAuthor
Glad you enjoyed the shortie

Thanks a lot, anon. I've planned a couple of growth-based stories, but my problem is I have more ideas than time. Expect something like that, though!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Slightly puzzling, but good story! Nice writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot 👌👌👌

Kinda wish there was a cause for the growth though, like maybe his drink was spiked by someone working at the theater or something. That's really my only criticism.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Steamy💦

Great, I’d love see more and maybe read drag out a bit. Other than that it’s hot and great

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Thoughts

Two things that could help your story:

1. The cock size is entirely unrealistic, and would need fantasy based explanation to back it up. Also, the main character seems shocked and enamored by it, so is alit a girl that wished to be turned into a boy by a genie?

2. Would have been more interesting if the only bucket around was the girl in the row ahead, and the main character ejaculated in her popcorn. Would come off as more erotic at the very least.

Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

how silly

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