All Comments on 'Popping His Cherry Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

So Loren, going to fuck Taylor, is mother & his neighbor?

AlbedoGrimoireAlbedoGrimoireabout 3 years ago

Great chapter I’m looking forward to reading more!

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationabout 3 years ago

Brilliant series. Well told smutty tales like this always leave room for more chapters. Of course, you are the author, so please indulge your imagination.

Thanks for sharing this gem.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

More please with Georgia and Lana if possible.

lockedboilockedboiabout 3 years ago

more plssss maybe add a little chastity ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Fabulous - can you continue this story? i'd love to see his friend get involved too :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. I hope there will be more parts in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WOW!! This story could use a couple (few) more chapters. Count me as exited and awaiting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Part 3 when?!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

More please!

Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayalmost 2 years ago

After reading the comments it is obvious that many other people besides myself would love to see additional chapters. It really is a very good and interesting story that deserves additional attention. All of the characters are adorable making it even that much more enjoyable. Do consider an update asap, no pressure, well maybe just a little. 💋

Veronica

4Leather4Leatheralmost 2 years ago

Loved it can’t wait for the next chapter.

Lucylou2020Lucylou2020almost 2 years ago

I love it! I want to live it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awesome story and the way you have the characters playing off each other as though they only have selective memory makes this so much better and funnier. Amazing at that age how easy it is to control a guy’s attention and even his direction. My only problem is that this seems to be another of those stories that ends up being wonderful at the start and then the writer bails on it. I haven’t any idea why because there are so many possibilities but my personal feelings are that I would rather any author decide to not write a story if you are just going to walk away and leave all of your fans and readers hanging and hoping. I have read story beginnings and watch people comment for 8+ years for the author to continue but it is a waste of time. I think most guys would be happier with a ruined orgasm than a partial story that is abandoned. Sorry but I felt it had to be said and I know I am far from being alone on this opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Alsome can not wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It's just not how people would react. Loren maybe, she's just a twisted cunt, but the neighbor girl would have rescued him and the mother sure wouldn't have just said, "carry on". It just doesn't make sense. Guy's that age want pussy, if they have a hard time getting it they move on. They don't waste alot of time and money letting someone turn him into a girl.

ColonelinguistColonelinguistover 1 year ago

This was a pretty cool story FF. Although I would have preferred it if Loren had been a chick with a dick; a real dick I mean. It would have opened up a door to several other scenarios, but that’s just where my head is at I guess.

friskyboifriskyboiabout 1 year ago

Oh love this story i just wish it would continue Thanks

ShortyMacShortyMacabout 1 year ago

I liked the storyline, but like Colonelinguist said I would have like Loren better if she was a chick with a dick. I’ve been with a few and it is so much fun with the real thing. I still give you five solid stars.

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TiffanyFoxxTiffanyFoxx11 months ago

Brilliant. Please continue

lacorsettedlacorsetted10 months ago

Another chapter please. This story is intriguing. Love it!

married_but_curiousmarried_but_curious6 months ago

Great story! Would love to read a third chapter if you want to write it!

DiaperboyMiDiaperboyMi3 months ago

Amazing story. Definitely need to find out what happened next 😊

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great story would love another chapter

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Would love to read more about these 2.

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