by FemFreak
Brilliant series. Well told smutty tales like this always leave room for more chapters. Of course, you are the author, so please indulge your imagination.
Thanks for sharing this gem.
Fabulous - can you continue this story? i'd love to see his friend get involved too :-)
WOW!! This story could use a couple (few) more chapters. Count me as exited and awaiting
After reading the comments it is obvious that many other people besides myself would love to see additional chapters. It really is a very good and interesting story that deserves additional attention. All of the characters are adorable making it even that much more enjoyable. Do consider an update asap, no pressure, well maybe just a little. 💋
Veronica
Awesome story and the way you have the characters playing off each other as though they only have selective memory makes this so much better and funnier. Amazing at that age how easy it is to control a guy’s attention and even his direction. My only problem is that this seems to be another of those stories that ends up being wonderful at the start and then the writer bails on it. I haven’t any idea why because there are so many possibilities but my personal feelings are that I would rather any author decide to not write a story if you are just going to walk away and leave all of your fans and readers hanging and hoping. I have read story beginnings and watch people comment for 8+ years for the author to continue but it is a waste of time. I think most guys would be happier with a ruined orgasm than a partial story that is abandoned. Sorry but I felt it had to be said and I know I am far from being alone on this opinion.
It's just not how people would react. Loren maybe, she's just a twisted cunt, but the neighbor girl would have rescued him and the mother sure wouldn't have just said, "carry on". It just doesn't make sense. Guy's that age want pussy, if they have a hard time getting it they move on. They don't waste alot of time and money letting someone turn him into a girl.
This was a pretty cool story FF. Although I would have preferred it if Loren had been a chick with a dick; a real dick I mean. It would have opened up a door to several other scenarios, but that’s just where my head is at I guess.
I liked the storyline, but like Colonelinguist said I would have like Loren better if she was a chick with a dick. I’ve been with a few and it is so much fun with the real thing. I still give you five solid stars.
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Great story! Would love to read a third chapter if you want to write it!