All Comments on 'Poppy'

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fuze33fuze33almost 5 years ago
Nice

But I like more of a build up to the sex. Maybe tell more about the characters and the world they live in. I'm not a writer by any means but I like storytelling and not having the sex or sexual acts right at the start. I hope you continue to write. I look forward to your next story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great job

Great story! I hope you continue and without adding dudes to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

This is really good. You should continue with this

cavshockey24cavshockey24almost 5 years ago
Love it

Keep it going!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Continue

Would love a continuation of the story of poppy does she get pregnant

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