All Comments on 'Porn Next Door Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I thought this was an ordinary "fuck & suck" story

Now, it turns out that Jaxon is a self-styled vigilante who wasn't as careful as he thought he was. Question is, what will he do if this information comes 'to light' & what will the girls do with said information if the action isn't to his liking? I'd like to see the next chapter.

PenningFreerPenningFreerover 14 years agoAuthor
Author's note from Penning Freer

Thanks for that incredibly concise synopsis! If I could have said it so succinctly I wouldn't have had to use all those words. That said, you are very close - with some slight twists. A hint...looking to the west into some emerging Writer's Symposia might yield some clues as to the larger picture. PND does not operate in a vaccuum. PND employees are working harder than I, unforunately, have been able to document - but more very soon.

Seriously, this is very helpful and useful input and your time and effort are greatly appreciated.

Best, Penning

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Huh?????

You left us hanging! Who are these women, and how do they know so much about him? What's "We know you better than you know you -- simply because you have no idea how well you are known in various circles -- and we do." supposed to mean? And what happens next? How old is this guy anyway to have had that whole other life before college? A-R-G-H-H-H!!!! There better be another chapter coming soon!

PenningFreerPenningFreerover 13 years agoAuthor
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MeltnmoldMeltnmoldabout 10 years ago
Porn Next Door

Chapter 1 & 2 are hot but where's Chapters 3, 4, and 5?

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