by monkeykinglives
Very intrigued by this one. Loved the background info on the business end of the porn industry.
It doesn't read like genre fiction. No disrespect intended – I think that is a good thing.
The sex scenes when they happen are engaging and funny but still somehow... to quote Paris Hilton: Hot.
Looking forward (with anticipation) to the next episode.
I like the pace. Lots of directions you can go from here.
The story starts out in separate pieces that comes together as the story moves along. It's a fine start. Keep it up!
Thanks. Yours is the first comment and encouragement for a while. I will think about starting the next installment.