All Comments on 'Pornstar Ch. 02'

by SimonBrooke

Sort by:
  • 2 Comments
trysttrystalmost 18 years ago
Absolutely wonderful!

My God! A writer! Who'd'a thunk? Maybe 1% overwritten, maybe 1% off in the individuality of the characterization, but literate, exceptionally well crafted - and sexy as hell, too. More, please. LOTS more.

Thanks.

Tryst

spoiled_bratschespoiled_bratscheover 14 years ago
glorious

So tender, so loving, so very real. Kyle is so sweet and awkward and nerdy and genuine... if one can't have one's first time with Tim from "Transition", this will do very nicely.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userSimonBrooke@SimonBrooke
I'm here because I'm interested in stories, both in reading them and in writing them. Most of my own stories aren't strictly erotica, although they all revolve around the area of sexuality, dominance, violence.

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES