All Comments on 'Positive Reinforcement Learning'

I really enjoyed this. Hoping for a part 2

Nice story. I hop it will continue. Thx

Since he has so many collars remaining there should be plenty of future training opportunities.

Love your story! Really hope next episode is all about Bella coming home and giving her remote to her new daddy.

Can't wait for a part 2! Really looking forward to Bella coming home and giving her present her mom's bf.

If you decide to carry on with this story, I think the more interesting path to take is for someone else to get their hands on the remote, probably by accident, and watch the conflict that arises when the sugar daddy tries to get her back. Just a thought. This is good as a stand-alone too. Flows nicely, prose and structure is fun.

Pls show what happens when she gets home.

Being tamed by perv in her bed.

That 'd be awesome

Please tell me the adres, I need a birthday present for my girlfriend.

I’d love to see a part two for when Bella gets broken in and bred. Maybe even a part three with a time lapse and a view of her life after a few pregnancies.

Great story. Wish there were additional chapters, or that I could easily find equally good stories here.

Great idea. Seems like the game show is a legitimate idea as well. Could imagine someone who was arrogant enough to think she could beat the collar.

please keep writing this!

Please write more with Bella.

I would actually do anything for more of this story. It checks all the boxes for me. Please, please, write more.

Well written, clever and delightfully sinister, I loved this story. Would certainly like to read more about bella and other possible victims.

One of the best slave stories on this site.

This is my absolute favorite! I need more

Wickedly twisted, perfectly paced. Good stuff.

>” He moved the dildo-like ovipositor forwards and backward inside her brain, gently skull-fucking her…”

Gently skull-fucking her…lol

Gotta say, this is a crazy-good story and overall premise, good attention to "show, don't tell." I did think there was too brief an introduction of Bella, and perhaps her training was a bit too easy, but I'm not complaining!! *****

Incredible detailed story-telling. This isn't usually my jam, but please more!

Incredible story! Hope you gain a lot more followers and write more. Loved the tantalizing descriptions of how the beautiful naive teen is conditioned and trained to submit. You provided so much delicious room to imagine how she'll continue to be broken in and trained in the years to come!

I agree with many others here that this is a story deserving to be further explored through many different angles. Would love to read a detailed account of how Bella is deflowered and has the rest of her innocence stripped from her. Exploring the extremely conflicting emotions of her horny desperation and forced submission to this man she despises would be really hot! Exploring the auction environment, game show suggestion, or just how far Bella can be degraded and trained would be great!

This story has potential. I would like to see a sequel. I liked it a lot.

Would love some more chapters, what happens to the mother and daughter will the boyfriend get away with it

Sneak :D

so hot so hot so hot so hot!

OMGOSH!

My girlfriend and wife both love these stories

write a sequel!!!! please!!!

Great story, it’s to bad the mother and daughter didn’t get to over lap with each other after getting fixed..

Amazing story, would love to read some more....

You have to appreciate an evil and original story. He shoots and scores…….a fiver!

mom and bella r good girl doggies

Incredibly hot story, I check back here often in hopes of a second part. There are soooo many options to continue...!

You should consider continuing with this one I would love to see what you have for bella

THere just might be a market for one of those devices...

No no no.... why Bella's mom? Nooooooo

It is close to being very wrong. I forgot about that as the story progressed. Very naughty with a twist that ha to happen. Great story!

Sic in the best way!

Love this!! Definitely

This was sooo good! Would love to read what happens next!

Oh, wow, that’s messed up.

Pervert fantasy - but high on erotic thrill factor .... Love to read more about Bella and her mother ... ;-)

Would've been good if the sugar daddy had kept both mother and daughter but this was still a very fun read :D hopefully any future sequel might correct that - maybe he'll change his mind and buy her back at auction so that he can have both?

Please write more, very erotic

Very sexy story. As was mentioned below I would like the boyfriend to keep both the mom and the daughter.

Training them to love incestuously serving their new master.

Interesting writing style. I loved the emphasis on dialogue and implied action rather than the typical descriptions. It placed a lot more emphasis on the messed up situation itself. Oh, and the brain fucking scene was super hot.

Well written… although I want to wage unholy war on both the men and potential clients in the story… but an intriguing fantasy nonetheless.

Are you ever going to write what happens to Bella next?

Does anyone know any stories like this one?

This was a great read, thank you ^^;